Here is another poem that I'm not too proud of. This meeting was to write a hiaku. It sounds easy, but it is not. The rules of a hiaku;
A hiaku consists of three lines with a 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
Sounds almost too easy, right? bah!! I had a very hard time writing one.
And here it is.
warm sun rays settle
underneath orange and thin lids
seeing through closed eyes
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Loveliness. As always.
We're still on for tomorrow (Tues.) night, right? Please do not mind our incredibly disastrous house! Let me just say it has been a wild/busy past few days and we've not been home long enough to clean it all up...just home to make the mess.
See ya!
Beautiful, just beautiful!
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